Thursday, February 7, 2008

2-7-08: Prompt: Pain

Sorry I missed last weeks posting. Thrsday was not a good day here in my world. But this week I have recovered senses and offer you a new word:
pain

Let's see what you can do in 100 words.

Happy creating!

8 comments:

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Unknown said...

In the everlasting darkness, pain was meaningless. Faint whispers drifted around him, echoes of a world beyond that darkness. He knew he would be able to understand them if he just concentrated, but felt it wasn't worth the effort. He was so tired. Deciding to become one with the placid dark, he stretched his being (My mind? What am I now?), became less and less until he simply wasn't anymore.

Waking up on his couch, feeling rested and content, was a surprise. He sat up and looked around. Shit. What happened here? And is that a cornfield outside my window?

Anonymous said...

Pain. The only thing you realize. The only thing that still makes sense.
Pain is what makes the chill run up and down your spine, what makes you sweat and shake with cold at the same time.
Pain is what you long to feel, when you pick up the knife and put it to your skin.
Pain is what you know you should feel, but don’t, even when you watch the flood of your own blood drawing zig-zags on your skin. Pain is what turns the sharp knife into your best friend and changes your life into a never-ending nightmare.

Sleepy Jean said...

Just how can you describe the pain that you feel? Is it the loneliness, that feeling of being so alone, that nobody else has ever experienced it. Not a physical pain, but a mental one, one that no matter how hard you try you cannot expel from your brain. It never goes away, it lessens, but will never leave. It will shape the rest of you life, lead you on the right path and take you to pastures new. You never know at the time that the pain of loss will be the best thing that ever happened to you.

Raven said...

She felt it when she tried to move, that sharp pain that draws one’s breath back into the lungs. It was dark around her, and foggy in her mind. Another pain came and her memory snapped back. The car. She had hit a patch of wet leaves and lost control. Where had it ended up? Upside down somewhere. Was she off the road, on the road? Everything was disoriented and she felt like she was in limbo. Except limbo wasn’t supposed to hurt. So she wasn’t dead, but how long would that truth remain? Would anyone find her in time?

rel said...

Raven,
First try! Thanks for the invite.
I also posted this on "Writer's Island" today for the prompt "Change"

Changed

Lying, limbs entwined

Pelvises hinged in trusting.

Lips brushing, tongues darting

Her face flushed; the pressure

Builds

She focuses on her woman-hood.

The exquisite pleasures rise,

Peak, crescendo—subside,

Rise again and again.

Each time the pleasure holds

All of her attention!


Breast and belly swell

Aureoles, nipples darken—

Linea nigra scores her swollen corpus.

The warm fuzzies of mother-hood

Gives way to the waddling near term discomfort.


Lying, limbs akimbo, panting

Through chapped, pursed lips.

Pressure builds with tightening uterus.

Pain’s intensity grows stronger,

Peaks, crescendos, subsides,

Rises anew.

Pain, each growing pain, holds

All of her attention!!

rel

Raven said...

Wow! Thank you to all for joining in. So many variations! Wonderful entries from everyone!

Raven said...

Three months had passed and the pain of the winter was fading off. Each year, it became easier to leave it on the step of the cabin. She made time to find joy now, to exhilarate in the achievements of the kids at the center, to fill up on the sunshine and rain of the warmer days. These were the easiest times to pass off the pain. Her own injuries from the accident acted up as storms approached, deep in her bones, and it served as a touchstone to her soul. Each ache reminder her she was alive. And living.